Comments for Patchwork Magisters

Comment on The Sinner’s Price, Part Three by Michael

Michael — Wed, 22 Feb 2012 04:44:14 +0000

Train Wreck ahoy!

Michael — Sun, 19 Feb 2012 15:31:54 +0000

…..Oh, ye gods. I can already hear Yakety Sax going on.

Michael — Tue, 14 Feb 2012 00:35:03 +0000

Well this will be interesting.

Friv — Mon, 13 Feb 2012 23:45:38 +0000

Argh, html formatting for the lose. There were supposed to be extra spaces there. I’ll just add a manual break.

Nokareon — Mon, 13 Feb 2012 23:00:42 +0000

Unclear section break when it shifts perspectives. But good premise for the arc.

GG Crono — Mon, 13 Feb 2012 14:16:00 +0000

Suspense! :O

Mad Max — Sat, 11 Feb 2012 08:22:14 +0000

That laugh is anything but reassuring…
A lot of plot moving forward all at once. Should be interesting to see what’s coming up.

Friv — Sat, 11 Feb 2012 04:46:44 +0000

Heheheh.

Michael — Sat, 11 Feb 2012 01:41:20 +0000

Well, well, well. Isn’t that interesting?

Nokareon — Fri, 10 Feb 2012 20:38:04 +0000

“Sibilant” makes me think Djinn. They’re pretty useful, I guess.

Caio — Fri, 10 Feb 2012 19:49:16 +0000

Oh my, does everyone there has a Djinn?

Or are these voices just an aspect of a really powerfull schizophrenic mage?

Nokareon — Fri, 10 Feb 2012 04:22:18 +0000

Hey, there could still be a Part 10. He didn’t write “Next Chapter: …”